2023高考英语新课标一卷读后续写下水文范文

2023高考英语新课标一卷读后续写下水文范文

（新高考1卷适用江苏、河北、福建、山东、湖北、湖南、广东、浙江、辽宁、海南、重庆、北京、天津、上海等省市）

读后续写原文

When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher encouraged me to enter for a writing contest. I did not love writing and my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of theTitanic as an oral report — a one-act play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he. So, why to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. And if you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at有机会this.”

I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. The story would come straight from the horse’s mouth绝对可靠. Not a brilliant notion/ idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice. What did the horse think, as he ripped/ got through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. Igot tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s fabled/ imaginary horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. With a dictionary. I enlisted/

asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the finished essay, my teacher read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again. And no name. Entries are anonymous匿名的.” I wrote it again. And again and again. If I didn’t win, I didn’t care.

Paragraph 1:When I almost forgot the contest, the news came.

Paragraph 2:I went to the teacher’s office after the award presentation.

续写原文梗概：

我对写作文没有信心，老师却鼓励我参赛，我在努力的过程中获取了信心和乐趣，而不在意比赛本身。

第一段第一句：我都快忘了比赛的时候，消息来了。 第二段第一句：颁奖仪式后我去找我的老师。

今年的读后续写是通过文学作品创作，感受语言文学之美，即“美育”，与21年为“妈妈准备早餐”的劳动教育、22年“残疾孩子参与马拉松比赛”的体育，德智体美劳五育并举！

教师试水作文

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A few weeks later, I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.A wave of astonishment swept over me.I won the first prize.Recalling the past struggling days, I deeply sensed that it was my teacher's encouragement, my family's support,and my wholehearted commitment that made it all worthwhile.The award presentation came as scheduled.I delivered my short speech with aflame mood ,like in my heart. My classmates stared at me with delight.Everything went smoothly and I was surrounded by flowers and applause.However, the person with whom I desired to share my joy was my teacher.

I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. “Thank you very much. My dear teacher.”I said in a gentle voice，lowering my head to catch my teacher's attention. Noticing me，he turned around，“Congratulations!You did a good job. Where there is a will，there is a way.You are supposed to believe in yourself.”I nodded ，full of gratitude.My teacher patted my back，sitting there as bright as a ray of sunshine.In the following days，I tried my best to work hard

everyday.From then on， not only did I have a good command

of writing，but I also knew the truth——fear never builds the future, but hope does.

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When I almost forget the contest, the news came. It was announced that the anonymous writer had won the first prize in the writing contest. Hearing the news, I was hardly able to speak through excitement. I could not believe it was the fact because I always felt I was not a student competent in writing. Undoubtedly, it was my teacher’s encouragement and faith in me that led me to the way of literary writing. Words failed to express my appreciation to him. The first prize was largely due to his inspiration on me.

I went to the teacher’s office after the award presentation. Knowing the news, he congratulated me on my excellent performance. A big smile spread over his face. I expressed my heartfelt appreciation to him for his guidance and encouragement. After repeating what he had said before, he continued with a firm look in his eyes. He said he could sense a determined attitude, careful and creative thinking in my story. He encouraged me to keep on writing and have confidence in myself. From then on, I gradually developed

my interest in writing and gained confidence. Though many years passed, his words dwelled in my mind.

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When I was almost forgot the contest, the news came. I won the first price at the competitive contest. That was the first time in my life I was struck down. My classmates and teachers all stared at me in disbelief and expected me to say something but at that moment words filled me. “Congratulations. I'm really proud of you and there is going to be an award presentation next Sunday.” My Social study teacher said with delight. Tears welling in my eyes, I was grateful to him for his inspiration and encouragement.

I went to the teacher's office after award

presentation. When asked about how I felt, I really had a wonderful sense of fulfillment and got a taste for writing. “I learn from this contest that if you try something new and keep on and you will be pushed to a new level and have a new experience.” I replied with excitement. He smiled to me, nodding for recognition. “So never say never, that is what I want you to know.” His words stay with me and help

get through ups and downs when taking on new challenges in my life.

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When I almost forgot the contest, the news came.Hearing that I won the first prize, I was so excited that I jumped with joy. Never had I thonght that I could win the prize in writing.After all,I was not good at writing and I lacked confidence in the writing before.It was my teacher＇s encouragement that made a big difference.Without my teacher's guidance and passion, I wouldn't have discovered that I had the potential in writing.

I went to the teather's office after the award presention. Looking at me with smile, my teacher gave me a warm hug, saying that he was proud of me. Deepy moved by his words, I burst into tears. \" Thank you, my dear teaher. I would never forget the days when you taught me practical writing methods with great patience.\" I said to him. What I learned from the writing contest was that when faced with challenges,I should be courageous and try to make a difference!

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When I almost forgot the contest, the news came.I won the third place in the contest while my deskmate Kate ranked the first.The good news made me happy and shocked. Never did I think I could win the reward, even I almost forgot the contest. I replayed the writing experience in my mind. The process of creating the entry was filled with hardship and annoyance , but it deserved my unremitting effort. The jury issued a certificate to prove my efforts.

I went to the teacher’s office after the award presentation. The teacher walked towards me excitedly and gave me a big hug ,saying “ congratulations, boy and have a seat.” I sat next to him shyly. “Don't be nervous,my boy. now tell me your feelings about it.” I firstly expressed my gratitude to my loved teacher and said “ What you said gave me a great deal of encouragement, which inspired my motivation to writing. I wouldn't had won the place without your help.” “My boy, remember ,you should thank yourself . After all, hard work always pays off. ” I benefit a lot from my loved teacher. His painstaking care and encouragement will influence my lifetime.

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When I almost forgot the contest, the news came.A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.When my teacher walked into the classroom, a shining bright smile was on his face. He just had announced I won the first place in the writing competition when everyone surprised in disbelief firstly but then gave me thunderous applause. Hearing the announcement,I also cannot believe my ears. I didn’t intend to won the prize but to enjoy the pleasure of writing. Then my teacher told me to take the award, which was a big prize for me. So moved and happy was I to hear the news that I gave my teacher a tight hug. When the award presentation finished, I felt a mixture of feelings. I want to say something with my teacher.

I went to my teacher’s office after the presentation. When walking near my teacher, he also found me with a big smile on his face. “congratulations, you did a good job in the writing contest”. With these encouraging words, I said with a whole grateful heart. “ Thank you very much for encouraging me to join the contest, without your help and direction, I couldn’t have achieved such great progress, now I found I have been into writing,not only the writing itself but the process does count. I will never give up and

live up to your wish ”. Hearing my words, the teacher also felt a great belief, he said he loved my stories and believed I will be more successful in the future. Heartfelt thanks should be given to your teacher who gives you life direction and principles.

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When I almost forgot the contest, the news came.I received a phone call, and it was from the organization that said I had won the grand prize. As soon as I heard the news, I quickly shared this unbelievable news with my mother. She hugged me tightly, tears filling her eyes. Then my mother accompanied me to receive the award, reminding me that it was because of my teacher's help that I had become who I am today. I should also share this joy with my teacher.

I went to my teacher’s office after the

presentation.\"I am so happy for you,\" my teacher said, nodding and looking at me. Pride and tears filled his eyes. He continued, \"I knew you could do it. You deserve this recognition, and it's just the beginning. You should keep going.\" I replied, \"Without your help, I wouldn't have achieved what I have today. Your support and guidance have

had a tremendous impact on me.\" After that , his words have echoed in my ears for many years,and every time I start writing, I will think of my teacher. He taught me how to believe in myself and guided me towards a bright future.

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A few weeks later, I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. To everyone's surprise, I, an immigrant, won the first place in the writing contest. Hearing the good news, I felt a sense of joy surging through me. I leapt into the air and shouted out loud, \"I made it!\".During the award presentation ceremony, I was invited to deliver a speech. Patiently and confidently, I told the audience how I once didn't love writing and now enjoyed writing and how I realized the value of perseverance with the help of my teacher.

I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. With the trophy in hand, I entered the office. My teacher rose from the seat and came up to me. \"Congratulations!\" he said, slapping me on the back. He grinned from ear to ear as I showed him the trophy. \"I owe my success to you. \"I said sincerely, \"Without your encouragement and belief, I wouldn't have succeeded.\" He

laughed, his eyes shining with excitement. \"I knew you had it in you. I'm proud of you for not giving up.\" Whenever looking back on this incident, I feel extremely grateful to him. It was my social studies teacher who encouraged me to realize my potential and thus changed my trajectory of my life.