专题06 书面表达
2019
七、书面表达
61.假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。 1.要点：
1）这个名人是谁；
2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐； 3）你想和他或她谈论什么。 2.要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数80左右。 【答案】例文
I’d like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei. Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today.
I’m expecting this lunch already. 【解析】
【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你想和哪位名人共进午餐。主要从1）这个名人是谁；2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；3）你想和他或她谈论什么。这三个方面去介绍。注意时态应为一般现在时或一般将来时。人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. 任先生被认为是一个伟大的人，他总是把一切都安排在前面。
句子who always has everything mapped out ahead.是由who引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】
If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. 如果时间允许的话，我今天就为我们青少年征求他的意见。
句子If time permits, 是由if 引导的条件状语从句。
2018
七、书面表达（15分）
每个人都生活在一个特定的环境，请以“What I like about where I live”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你的生活环境。 1.要点：1）你生活在什么样的环境； 2）你喜欢这个环境的什么； 3）你对这个环境有何期望。
2.要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数80左右。
What I like about where I live
【总体分析】
本篇作文仍然按照以往规律出题,以和“我”有关的人或事情为主题,但是今年不像之前主要写人或者写事,而是写“我居住”的地方,作文以一般现在时为主要时态进行描述,以总分总形式完成写作。 【写作步骤】 1审体裁:记叙文 2审内容:内容要点 3审时态:一般现在时 4审要求:80词左右 第二步:“鱼骨”式写作
总领句,写出“我”出生的地点并且点题
第一段开头段(引出下文)
I was born in a small and quiet city in Henan Provinee. I really like this beautiful place that I live.描述我居住城市环境,并且写出了我喜欢的这个城市的原因和我对这个城市的期待Different from other cities. she has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow 第二段主体段(按照要求围绕两方面展开描述
I and peaceful life. And that is what l like most about no high speed train. I hope she will soon have high speed trains so that I can travel to other cities more 总结升华感情 第三段结尾段
What a nice place to live! I love this city and hope she will get better 【参考范文】
I was born in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. I really like this beautiful place that I live.
Different from other cities, she has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city. However, my city has her problems. She has no high speed train. I hope she will soon have high speed trains so that I can travel to.
What a nice place to live! I love this city and hope she will get better
2017
七、书面表达
81．我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手．请以\"I did it\"为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述一件你完成的棘手事情． 1．要点：1）你做了什么事情； 2）你是如何做那件事情的； 3）你做完那件事情后的感受．
2．要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数80左右． I did it
【分析】高分句型： 句型一：
I have also been infected by this atmosphere and ready to join the crowd．我也被这种气氛感染了准备好加入大伙．
现在完成时被动语态：have/has been done． be infected by 被…感染 ready to 准备做某事 句型二：
I could not help feeling sad for him．我不禁为他感到悲伤． can't help doing 不禁做某事 【解答】I did it
How time flies!I'm fifteen years now．There was one thing that I will never forget．Gone through that matter，I seem to grow up a lot．That was New Year's Eve last year，the students send each other greeting cards．Cards with their own wishes and sent to good friends．I have also been infected by this atmosphere and ready to join the crowd．【高分句型一】Suddenly，I saw a student sitting there alone．That is not the famous\"naughty King\"Liu Kai do？But now，he seems like a changed man．How he got it？I looked at him puzzled．Suddenly，I wake up．Certainly because no one sent him a greeting card，and no one said to him words of wish． I could not help feeling sad for him．So I handed him a greeting card，and said to him：\"happy holiday!\"He looked at me then looked 【高分句型二】at the cards，said happily：\"Thank you!\"His eyes filled with happiness．He stood up and said：\"I also have a beautiful card．\"（做了什么事和如何做的）Looked at him，and I smiled．How important Group is!（感受）
2016
七、书面表达 （15分）
我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以 “The biggest personal change I’ve ever made” 为题，并根据要
点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1. 要点：1）变化是什么；
2）变化是如何发生的； 3）变化后有何感受；
2. 要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数80左右。 【参考范文】
The biggest personal change I’ve ever made
The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually I bagan to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.
Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot. 【解析】
书面表达为命题作文。属于写人叙事类，回忆事件以一般过去时为主，并抒发个人情感及感悟。近六年考4次，是高频考点。话题内容以第一人称的角度记叙成长过程中经历的巨大改变，贴近学生日常生活，学生有内容可写，有话可说。这类书面表达既考查学生们平时对于好词好句、名言警句以及和教材话题相关的短语、句型的积累；同时也能反映出学生对于生活的关注、体验和感悟程度。 阅卷分数档标准
考生应根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整、准确地表达所要求的内容。
2015
七、书面表达（15分）
在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西，你想拥有什么？请以“I want to have ” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。
要求：1.请补全标题，如 a football， a mountain bike 或 a magic paintbrush 等； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80词左右。
I want to have 【答案】
One possible version:
I want to have a magic paintbrush
I want to have a paintbrush with magic power. It can make whatever I draw become a reality.
With the paintbrush, I can draw a new earth. There will be so pollution on it. The rivers will be clean and the sky will be blue. With the paintbrush, I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family.
I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world.
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